It was an eerie fresh morning and I was coming towards the trains today was a show. But I stopped dead when I saw the trains they were all rusty and old looking. The air whipped around me and made the trains creak and clang and made the trains look like something from a movie! Then someone OR something tapped me on the shoulder… 

I slowly turned around and screamed! In front of me was…was…a … skeleton! ‘Hey what are you doing here!’ I was going to reply but he cut me off in his croaky voice again. ‘I never invited you to my place!’ Then the person coming towards me said ‘ My name is Mr Man, whats yours?’ ‘Don’t play happy talk with me! But my name is Bob.’ I started to speak ‘m..m-my n-name is -r-Rosy.’ ‘r-Rosy I like that name.’ said Bob. ‘Well I am very sad of the way you have treated these trains.’ said Mr Man as he started to cry! ‘Well I don’t want to talk to you any more!’ said Bob angrily. ‘Can you tell us how to get out of here?’ ‘NO! because you will never get out!!’ Well I want to go home thought Rosy. ‘ Well you can’t go home Rosy, and Mr Man you can’t fix one of these trains. ‘How do you know what we are thinking !?!’asked Mr Man. ‘ Well I will tell you if you help me…’ ‘Well we can’t help you.’ said Mr Man. ‘Yes we can! Rosy shouted I want to go home!’ Then suddenly the skeleton started to drive away inside a small vehicle. There was one left and Rosy said ‘After him!’ ‘But I can only drive trains!’ ‘Well I am to young to drive, and I want to go home!’ ‘Well I can’t!’ ‘Fine!’

I give up thought Rosy. A few minutes later MR Man said ‘Okay fine I will drive it!’ And then he hopped in next to Rosy in the driver’s seat and drove off. 

10 MINUTES LATER

They both saw the other vehicle parked on the grass. And spotted the car. Then they both got out. In front of them was a house, It was made out of brown and red bricks. And had a chimney on top. Green and purple puffs were coming out of the chimney and smelt of something like burnt toast and cookies. They could hear talking inside the house. Mr Man knocked on the door. The talking stopped and the door opened. There stood a man with a long blue clock with stars on. ‘Hello my name is Mr Man and we are looking for a skeleton called Bob, have you seen him?’ asked Mr Man. ‘Yes he just came past and he replied. ‘What’s up with your chimney?’ asked Mr Man rather rudey. ‘WELL I AM A WIZARD! MR SPELLS TO BE CORRECT!!’ 

‘Run!’ I cried and ran to the vehicle. They both got in and started to drive away. The wizard who is Mr Spells started to run after them! ‘Of course he’s a wizard! Blue clock and chimney, also they hate traveling.’ siad Rosy. Then suddenly the car thing made a sputtering noise, and stopped. The wizard was catching up too. ‘Why has it stopped!’ yelled Rosy! ‘The petrol!’ Yelled Mr Man! They both stopped dead when they heard Bob laughing hard! Mr Man looked around he was no were to be seen! Where is he! Thought Rosy. ‘I am invisible, the wizard gave a potion to me for it!’ ‘You will never get home….’

Just then the wizard appeared. ‘You were- ‘AAHH AANN! screamed Mr Man don’t hurt me!’ Then they were suddenly across a river that had bubbled up. Mr Spells jumped back in surprise! ‘How did you do that!?!’ he cried in surprise to Bob. ‘Well I stole a potion from you to do that!’ Then the wizard disappeared and came back. Everything was black! Then Rosy saw eyes looking at her they were cats! The cats started to attack Bob who was trying to fight blackness! Suddenly Rosy felt very light and was spinning around and around slowly. Then she stopped and the lights turned on. She was standing next to Mr Man and Mr Spells while Bob was still being attacked by the cats. ‘Come with me.’ said Mr Spells ‘I am sorry there was no show Bob just wanted to have some servans. Well you can leave now, and don’t come back!’ Then Rosy, and Mr Man walked home feeling confused. 

 

The end

One thought on “The train show

  1. Kia Ora Hannah!!
    I really really really liked your story!!!!!!
    It had lots of different ways of describing your story!!
    I also loved the skeleton character!!
    and Rosey! great job Hannah!!!! also I think your story
    is amazing!!

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